Excellent horror story with great character interaction and an action packed plot. It starts out slowly with the kids in school, but once they leave for the fieldtrip the action really picks up. The story seemed to cross The Hills Have Eyes with The Watcher. The only issue I have with it is, there are quite a few grammar errors throughout. They do not detract from the story, but are an irritation. Without those errors, I would have given this a 5 star.